The mark received from my business plan draft was a low first/high 2.1 so is a motivation to get a solid low first by amending the current work.
Comments from tutor:
- More visuals
- Make the font larger
- Logo and branding are resonable
- Solve design problems within the products as it is not yet clear how exactly they will perform
- Cash Flows are realistic
- Very good understanding of the market area
With this in mind, all points have been addressed and will hopefully change the mark for the better.
Many visuals have been included such as visualisations of the products within an interior, as well as a more in depth description of products and their performance. I have also elaborated on the design process, increased the font and changed the branding logo to a clearer design.
Business Final Deadline: 12th March 2014